In high school he wasjust a flame -- but he's the one
I'll love forever.
My temper flames up. I can't express how I wish
I could let it go!
A flame sucks me in.Hypnotized, I gaze through
to a secret place.
to a secret place.
Image credit:
"No. 18" /Jackson Pollock , 1950
WOW.. I love ALL THREE HAIKUS!
ReplyDeleteHappy Wednesday!
Mine is here
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shakira
All terrific, but love the first one best ;)
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I, too, find it easy to become mesmerized by flames...
ReplyDeleteImagine the flames!
great haikus!
ReplyDeleteI love the use of the Pollock to illustrate strong feelings, such a great metaphor!
my own high school flame turned out to be my soulmate! although he is gone forever, his love stayed with me. i love your haikus! the first one made me smile. :)
ReplyDeleteYour Inner Flame (Haiku)
Burning Heart (Haiku)
Fabulous as always
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